Solitary flower

The day was a rainy gloom,

But she was set to bloom.

Petrichor mingled in her breath,

She yearned for her hiraeth.

It was a starlit night, mesmerising twilight.

She perched  at the window,

Adorning a white frilly dress,

Standing on her green stilettos.

She peeped out to see, on a romantic spree!

There came the mighty wind,

Nudged her skin,

Allured she lost to his charms,

He embraced her in his arms.

Bowing down to her, 

Requested for a dance.

Swaying her torso, he made a dip,

The moment of love, 

Triggered passionate kiss,

Twisting and turning,

 She dunked in the ocean of eternal bliss!

Wind asked her to tag along,

Through a soothing love song.

She rose and she fell,

Trapped in her solitary abode,

As the wind left, she was dead.

That moment of eternal bliss,

No, she could not get over it!

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18 responses to “Solitary flower”

  1. That’s so beautiful 💚💚💚

    1. Kirti thanks a bunch for always reading and appreciating ❤️

  2. Oooo Aarti, this is just soooooooo Beautiful 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. Loveee this..
    Love depicted in such a wonderful way

    1. Parul, you know what you are to me. Love for being a friend that you are. Thank you for loving and encouraging always❤️

  3. Waooooo! This is supremely beautiful, depicting the power and liberation in yielding. In surrendering to love whether it is rewarding or not. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️. Ahhh! The disillusionment of love!
    You understand love in such a beautiful and pure way my dear Aarti❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Parul, your comment shows how much you understand me. Love you my friend. You commented twice it made me happy to the core❤️

  4. Beautiful poem Aarti! Depicting intense love 🙂

    1. Nikita thank you so much for always reading and loving my poems❤️

  5. Loved the metaphor you have used.. Beautiful!

    1. Jaya Maam thank you for reading and loving it❤️.

  6. Perfect dancing pose and then the loss.
    Touching and beautiful.

    1. Sarita Maam thank you for always reading and showering your blessings 🙏🤗🤗❤️

  7. This Is a stunning piece, my dear Aarti💚💚
    Lovely

    1. Thank you sweetness, coming from you it means a lot. Much love

  8. This is so beautiful..I totally got transported to a serene world of love 💚💚

    1. Debai God has sent you for making me smile with your words. I so happy you loved it❤️

    1. Waqas Gul. Thank you for reading and loving it 😊

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