#Artoonsinn#PoetryParlour#Poattic-5#REWIND
REWINDING LIFE
What should I rewind?
My untold miserable state of mind?
Or that sudden surge of love blind?
My scandalous freefall from the palace of illusions?
Or my rapid, existential practical solutions?
My tethered, unspoken, immolated self?
Or my coming of age with my loved ones’ help?
Those ceaseless moments of undiluted pain?
Or my unabashed dance at the music of rain?
My beaten, battered state, at the face of adversity?
Or my soulful search for balance and sanity?
Those punishing moments when it really did hurt?
Or those cherished moments when I was spoiled rotten with love?
Those dilly-dallying, nerve-wrecking phases of indecision?
Or my walking the long road of life to comprehend realism?
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As I look back at my life with some regret, and some hope,
I get a bird’s eye-view of my life’s broad spectrum bioscope.
Here the bigger picture is scripted with my inaction, action, pains and gain,
So, if I have to rewind, I guess ,
I have to give equal weightage to all of them.
Beautiful 💚💚💚
Thanks Kirti
Beautiful , thought provoking
Thanks mam
Wow! Beautiful poem, Indrani!💚💚
Thanks Pooja
Splendid lines
Thanks Waqas
Beautiful poem Indrani
Loved it! What a beautiful ending.
Thanks Nitika
Beautiful and contemplative.
Thanks Sai
Beautifully penned, though rewinding is good for self analysis many of us spend too much time brooding over the past
Loved the way you have ended the poem
Thanks Pradhnya
The past is gone yet the remnants make us nostalgic! What a beautiful poetry piece this is 💚
Thanks Rianka
What a terrific poem! Wowww!
Indeed, the roses and thorns on the way and within us merit equal weightage. So well written.
Thanks Moonmoon
True.. No moment is lesser than the other
Thanks mam
It”s so beautifully woven💚
Thanks Sonali
Beautiful is the word. The last line said it all. 💚
Thanks Debashree
Beautiful and thought-provoking
Thanks Roodaba
Very nice poem. Loved it
Thanks Gowri
Such deep questions. Such a lovely poem!
Thanks Natasha.
Loved your retrospective poem.❤️
Loved it 💚 you have a way with words!
Regret and hope are two aspects of life. Well expressed.