Tonight, the colour is blue.

My blue saree that once sent tingles down your spine-

Like a first kiss, when I wore it every time-

It’s haunting me : Tonight,the pain is true.

Tonight, the rain is overdue.

I’ve been holding back this torrent for long,

But the pregnant clouds tonight don’t seem as stubborn,

Tonight the squall of memories will get through.

Tonight, my feelings are blue.

Our favorite songs that I had stopped listening to-

I’m playing in my head to remind myself of you,

Tonight, I want to dig the old wound anew.

Tonight, I’m having a rendezvous-

Memories of your sojourn with me and I –

Just us, insignificant under the vast night sky,

Tonight, I wish some stars were shooting through.

Tonight, it’s time to bid adieu.

Your crooked smile that once won me over,

I saw it again and your gaze of a lover,

As you looked at her : Tonight, my loss is true.

Tonight, the town’s painted blue.

My proud heart that couldn’t ask you to stay,

Heavy with regrets and love unspoken yet-

It’s crushing me : Tonight, my love is true.

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18 responses to “Blue”

  1. Whoa! Tell me more in mournful numbers.

    1. Thank you for stopping by! πŸ’š

  2. Lovely as always. I have a question – All your write ups have the word stubborn. Is that a feeling deep down in your heart?

    1. Thank you for reading! πŸ’š
      And they do? 😁 It’s quite unconscious then, because I can be very indecisive at times. You’re very observant. 😊

      1. Shattered- the blades of fan moved like stubborn kids despite switching off
        One life- The train stood like a stubborn kid
        And this poem.
        πŸ€—πŸ˜€

        1. β˜ΊοΈπŸ’šπŸ˜

  3. Blue is the new colour for love, then. It isn’t boring at all. Vibrant n trueπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Blue… the colour for love that wasn’t… Nil rong chhilo bhishon priyo πŸ’š

  4. A very unique way to express the facets of the color blue .Beautiful poem.

    1. Thank you for the appreciation. πŸ’šβ˜ΊοΈ

  5. Loved the way you used those rhyming words ..nice n catchy poem…also, cute lil bio too

    1. I tend to rhyme a lot when writing poetry πŸ˜‹
      Thank you for reading! πŸ’š

  6. Certain days are gloomy and blue. Nicely penned.

    1. Thank you ma’am… I’m so glad I could make you feel it. πŸ’š

  7. That’s a beautiful poem! Could feel the depth of love all through.

    1. Thank you Nitika…. Means a lot, coming from you. πŸ’š

    1. Thank you for stopping by! πŸ’š

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