The Unaccounted Pain

Covered in the warmth of my quilt white as a cloud,

I felt the morning rays shining aloud.

The stubborn heart ignored the Sun and dozed off again,

The Sun left me and arrived the shrewd  thunder with rain,

The raindrops knocked at my French window pane,

Unfolding myself in my manifold dress,

Stretching out of the tight embrace of my cosy bed,

The  morning zombie, found her love, the cup of Tea,

Gazing longingly on the drops of rain, my hands tried to feel it, but in vain.

I saw kids getting down the rickshaw, I heard driver shouting all aboard,

I saw a wrinkled, toothless smile, drinking the manna dew,

I saw two lovers in an umbrella, still drenched in rain planting a kiss,

I saw my crape jasmine too enjoying the bliss,

Ah! blessed are they, enjoying the little things, I felt an unaccounted pain!
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20 responses to “The Unaccounted Pain”

  1. Somali, thank you so much for reading and appreciating❤️

  2. Beautiful poem Aarti with vivid imagery! Enjoyed it 🙂

    1. Nikita thank you my dear for reading and loving it. It has motivated me to write more.❤️

  3. Nice one , lethargic mood still envious of those enjoying the rain

    1. Sarita Maam, thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment. It keeps me going. Gratitude 🙏❤️

  4. Beautifully written dear😍😍😍.
    The enjoyment of sleeping till late and later the guilt!
    Kudos to the wonderful imagery you have created with your imagination.
    👌👌👌👌

    1. Parul thank you so much sweetheart for reading and loving it❤️

  5. Poignant.. I could feel the sentiment expressed

    1. Jaya Maam, thank you so much for reading and appreciating. I am so happy you could feel my emotions ❤️

  6. That’s a wonderful poem Aarti! Loved it

    1. Thank you so much Gowri for reading and loving it ❤️

  7. Wonderful Aarti… Nicely expressed 💚💚

    1. Thank you Kirti for reading and appreciating. Much ❤️

  8. Beautifully imagined!

    1. Sai thanks for reading and appreciating, it keeps me going❤️

  9. Aarti, could relate to your poem. A lethargic day Turing away from the beauty around and missing out on magical moments

    1. Thank you Pradnya for reading and loving it. Happy you could relate to it❤️

  10. This is such beautiful writing

    1. Waqas Gul thank you for such a lovely comment. It will motivate me to write more❤️

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