It seems like riding the roller coaster
Without a start or an end
Like the ebb and flow
Running in my veins.
I cannot tell what drives it.
Chance or circumstance,
My thoughts, or your words,
That make me shrivel, smaller than an atom
Or fill me, to inhabit the whole universe.
For I still look around in wonder
Of a lost child,
Just like the old days
And reconcile to my self-
It is just the weight of my existence
That keeps me swinging forever,
Hooked to your destiny,
Moved by your gravity,
Leading or lagging,
Lingering, yet going on
Without respite, rewind, or release.
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So profound. Beautifully expressed the turmoil in words of pendulum.
Uniquely creative and described beautifully
You’re an awesome poet Sai 💚💚
As usual, marvellous writing.
Loved it! A very insightful piece, brilliant!
Loved it…. Too good💚💚💚
Profound, very well brought out the turmoil
Struggle and moving like a pendulum hooked to destiny. Nicely penned
Thank you Ma’am!
This is lovely. Ptofound yet simple
Wow Sai ! Your words are so so beautiful! Love it 😀
Awesome Sai penning a brilliant piece. Expressive 💚💚.
Thank you Moonmoon
Thank you Geeta
Very well written..
Thank you Taqdees
Lovely poem…the last line was exceptional
Thank you Ramya!
This is profound, yet appears simple! Its the meaning of existence expressed with ease! Love your thought process Sai! 💚💚💚
Thanks so much Anuradha!
So profound as always 💚💚
Thank you Pooja!
So well you have associated the oscillatory motion with human thought riding as roller coaster. And how you joined gravity to uncontrolled drivably force unseen and yet felt…
Very beautiful and creative work. Admirations.
Thank you Varsha Ma’am!
Deeo, profound and beautiful!
Thank you Jaya Ma’am!
A very profound poem. Loved it
This weight of existence is the bane of so many in this world. Love your beautiful,, soulful expressions.