The Layer

Just when I thought it was the end

Something within started to ascend

Whether it was the hope within

Or it came from a kin

That I’m still trying to gauge

For who brought me out of the cage

But also, I’m relishing this change

That happened off-stage

Which I didn’t push to occur

For I’d accepted all the flutter

Accepting my fate, I had slowed down

Most times, holding a frown

But then, things are taking shape now

Life’s getting a stream, can’t tell how

They say we’re just a Player

A part of us, organized by a Layer

That’s unseen

But felt

By few in the heart

And few in the soul!

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6 responses to “The Layer”

    1. Thanks Sonali ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  1. such a positive hopeful poem Nitika ..

  2. I could easily see this poem being set to a tune. Love the rhythm.

  3. This one reads like a, song with a beautiful thought… I hope someone picks these lines up and puts them to music.. That would be lovely

  4. Wow Mam
    That’s such a big appreciation and coming from you, I’m delighted ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

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