The insidious friend

The insidious friend

How can I tell my plight!

Oh, what a tangled web you had woven!

With the net of sugar-coated words,

And trapped me in the grip of fraudulence,

Only to send me in the deserts of  sorrows and teary ocean.

A sheer confusion, misdirection,

And a rope to the fake boat of temptation, you created,

Just to get the power and  strength, hun?

——

How can I tell the way you treated me, spread your lethal trap!

I thought you’re my well-wisher, but, you, a trickster?

I can’t forget the marvelous day that became the dark,

When we spent some time together,

You said, β€œLet’s take a bath in  the river together!”

Oh! Yes, you! Was it just to deceit me, Right?

You came out of the water, took my clothes,

Sprinkled on me some grains of bitterness and ran away!

——

O Crook, you eroded my strength and my very foundation.

As when I came out of the river,

The world saw me naked with sprinkled bitterness,

Turned their gaze away with rage

I then returned, disappeared, and hid in the abyss

Since then, you, a trickster LIE, traveling around dressed in my attire?

But how long? Truth anyways, triumphs!

I know, now, the world harbors no wish to meet a naked or bitter TRUTH,

As you satisfy the needs of society…

Pooja Mandla

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35 responses to “The insidious friend”

  1. Well portrayed the deceit. There are so many such faces that surround us. Good one

  2. Good oneπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. Thank you dear@sonaliπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Thank you Kirti πŸ’š πŸ’š

  5. Thank you @310703auriπŸ’š

  6. What a brilliant concept Pooja
    Well written πŸ’šπŸ’š

  7. Thank you@nikitaπŸ’š

  8. Very well crafted PoojaπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  9. Wonderfully written, Pooja. Indeed, lies thrive in today’s world.

  10. Thank you ma’am πŸ™‚

  11. This is such a beautiful poem πŸ’œ

  12. Very nicely written 😊

  13. Beautiful ,lies that hurt .
    # rulfy

  14. Bitter truth vs sweet lies! Great contrast

  15. Thank you@rianka dearπŸ’šπŸ’š

  16. Thank you Radhika πŸ’šπŸ’š

  17. Thank u Sarita ma’am πŸ™‚πŸ’šπŸ’š

  18. Thank you@sai-surve-rane for stopping by!πŸ’šπŸ’š

  19. The metaphor used is beautiful

  20. Thank you, Jaya ma’am!πŸ’šπŸ’š

  21. Thank you, dear Sheena πŸ’š

  22. I loved your metaphor: tricksters; how often we’re deceived by a smile.

  23. Absolutely true! Thank you for stopping by, ma’am!πŸ’šπŸ™

  24. Beautiful poem and yeah lies are sugar-coated, palatable and are preferable to the bitter truth.

    1. Thank you for reading, Roodaba πŸ€—πŸ’šπŸ’š

  25. True, nobody wants to see and accept the naked truth. Blatant lies are any day preferred over a bitter truth because they don’t hurt.

  26. True that, ma’am! Thank you for reading, ma’am!

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