Reminder

Dear Woman,

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I pondered over it for way too long

An ode would do or

Should I instead pen a song

For thy deeds shall no more go unsung

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I pondered over it day and night

How can all wrongs be set right

How can the ugly truths be altered

How shall my respect for thee be declared?

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I pondered over it every passing moment

To seek a way out of atonement

For tying thy spirit to chains of obligation

For pushing thee down to lay my foundation

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All pondering done, I hereby announce

All my sins shall henceforth be renounced

From sunrise till sunset,

One whole day to celebrate thy superpowers

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Thee shall be put up on a pedestal

Decorated, thee shall be sung praises to

I shall look up, my pride all bloated

Thee shall thus, bow to me. Incredible!

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From a well-wisher.

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***

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A golden opportunity that it was

Shame it is, but the Woman declined

A deal with self she made instead

She shall no more ‘choose’ to lag behind

She shall have no forbidden territories

She shall break free if ever be chained

Pedestal or hymns, she would never seek

She shall march ahead, aware that her past did reek

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Thus, a day she marked to help her remind

Of the promise she made to mankind

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15 responses to “Reminder”

  1. A very good perspective from the fair and the flawed!!

  2. A much needed ‘reminder’ for all of our kind. Beautiful one, Itali!

  3. Beautiful poem Maam

  4. A new dawn, fantastic. A strong message to all women.
    BTW I loved the phrase Forbidden territories, and pedestal myths… proclaims revolution of sorts.

  5. Powerfully penned reminder

  6. Just a day to remember that every day is Women’s day! How well interpreted!

  7. Wow… Awesome Itali

  8. Ah! This is so powerful.

  9. Refused to stay on pedestal.She will carve her own way.

  10. This is such a beautifully written piece, the stark reality – so cleverly shown!!

  11. We women will always carve our own ways. Beautiful thoughtπŸ’šπŸ’š

  12. Thank you readers 😍

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