Please forgive me

โ€œThank you,โ€ I wanted to say

When you stopped by to check on me

To ensure that my mind hadnโ€™t taken over my body,

To confirm that my emotions werenโ€™t controlling me

.

โ€œThank youโ€ I wanted to say

When you heard my silence

And just pressed my hands

To assure you were there, if I needed to speak

.

โ€œThank you,โ€ I wanted to say

When you held my hand and lifted me

Guiding me to the pitfalls at the crossroads

Watching me as I treaded one of those

.

โ€œThank you,โ€ I wanted to say

For the compromises you made, for our relationship

For the infinite love you showered on me

For the sleepless nights you spent for me

.

But I was distraught, and maybe I was lost

But I always found you, right beside me,

No questions asked, no judgments passed,

Unconditional support, you always offered me

.

And for all those times, when I wished to thank

But assumed you understood how grateful I am

And words of gratitude never reached my lips

I am sincerely remorseful and apologetic

.

Indebted to you I stand today

To you, I owe all my glory,

So I now bow my head and say,

โ€œPlease forgive me, Iโ€™m truly sorry.โ€

P.S. This poem is an ode to all those people in our lives- parents, siblings, friends, spouse, whom we tend to take for granted.

ยฉVandana Bhasin

02.04.2021

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36 responses to “Please forgive me”

  1. A beautifully touching poem, Vandana. Loved it. <3

    1. Thank you Moonmoon dear ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Beautiful, many times we miss to say thanks

    1. Absolutely! Taking some relationships for granted. Thanks for reading Sarita ji

  3. Such a poignant one, and also a reality of life.

    1. Isn’t it? Expecting people to understand that we are grateful. I’m glad you agree ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. So true. We often fail to thank and be grateful to those who are an integral part of our lives. Very nicely penned.

    1. Thanks Maneet. I felt that we owe a “thank you” to every relationship. Thanks to you for reading ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Indeed we take our most dear ones for granted and forget to say thanks. Lovely one

    1. True Natasha! In the race of life, we forget to acknowledge our thankfulness and appreciate little gestures that beautify our lives! Thank for reading and sharing your views.

  6. Lovely and heartwarming take. It’s so true, we take our near and dear ones for granted most of the times

    1. I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you my dear.

  7. Well said, how easily we take our lives one’s for granted

    1. Absolutely. It’s so easy to get stuck in the mundane of life to realize that we are missing some acknowledgments. Thank you for reading dear

  8. Extremely heartwarming ๐Ÿ’š I better read this poem to my parents… can I ?

    1. Totally my pleasure Shweta! It’s for all the parents, friends and relationships that are so crucial and yet miss the essentials that we use with even strangers. I’m so happy you found it worthy of sharing ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Heart warming…. love this unsaid gratitude ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Œ

  10. Very heartwarming, it rings so very true in our lives. Beautiful indeed Vandana.

    1. Thanks Mumtaz. I’m so glad it resonated with you.

  11. Beautiful tribute

  12. A heartwarming poem. We almost always fail to express the love and gratitude we feel for a loved one. A beautiful reminder to not take anyone for granted

    1. Absolutely right! We are so preoccupied in the maze of life that we forget to acknowledge the ones who give us strength. Thank you for reading.

  13. What a heartwarming piece๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Aww.. thanks Sonali ๐Ÿ™‚

  14. You’ve expressed yourself beautifully.

  15. Very touching, sure we do fail to acknowledge people really close to us

    1. I agree. Thank you for reading ๐Ÿ™‚

  16. Beautiful poem Vandana

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