Just a Dream!

she was like a speck of stardust

moonbeam like her flawless skin

her wavy tresses as if the surging sea

her emerald eyes like fireflies,

tranquil lips adorned her ruddy face

crowning, a mermaid-like physique

like the whistling tune of a dolphin

resonated her soulful voice, 

*

a few lucky eyes caught her glimpse

when she strolled along the shores

on lonesome evenings,

but her enthralling beauty 

wasn’t for the weak hearts 

a look in her eyes and they 

softened into shimmering particles, 

*

mystical butterflies trailed her path

sometimes when she 

ventured the timberlands

a soft touch of her scented fingers

blessed new life to the wilted flowers,

her cloud-like misty gown 

when brushed the green carpet

tickled the sleeping grasshoppers 

thrilled the chirping crickets,

*

she was the enchantress 

a forlorn heart, caged in 

the body of a damsel

she toured the earth 

on Blue Moon nights 

searching her lost soulmate,

to the world, she was a surreal beauty

but no one knew her real story

she came from a mystical city

with a soul that’s insatiable till eternity.

Pic Coutesy: pixabay

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20 responses to “Just a Dream!”

  1. An enchanting verse. Love the vivid imagery. <3 <3 <3

    1. Thank you moonmoon๐Ÿ’š

  2. Imagery 100 marks
    Content 100.marks
    Rhythm 100 marks
    You got 300 on 100 darling. Too good

    1. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’š
      Love you sweetie

    1. Thank you Gowri๐Ÿ’š

  3. Awesome imagery๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thanks Kirti๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  4. Vivid imagery ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thank you pooja๐Ÿ’š

  5. Beautiful imagery, an enchanting verse

    1. Thanks Nitika๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’š

  6. Wow, those last two lines <3

    1. Thank you my dear๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ˜

  7. Beautiful imagery
    Loved reading this poem, enchanting

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