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Emptiness

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Jaya Pillai
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A tendril of smoke

rises into nothingness

From a cigarette

that empties itself out.

Like thoughts from a broken heart

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12 responses to “Emptiness”

  1. Shail Raghuvanshi Avatar
    Shail Raghuvanshi

    Short and just right, Jaya.

  2. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Thanks 💚

  3. Sai Avatar
    Sai

    A great metaphor.💚

  4. Sonali Ray Avatar
    Sonali Ray

    Wow! Spoke volumes without telling anything.💚💚💚

  5. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Thanksss!

  6. Pooja Mandla Avatar
    Pooja Mandla

    Wow 👌👌

  7. Mumtaz N K Avatar
    Mumtaz N K

    🤩 wowww!

  8. Nitika Sawhney Avatar
    Nitika Sawhney

    Wow! Just beautiful 🙂

  9. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Thanks so much 💚

  10. Moonmoon Chowdhury Avatar
    Moonmoon Chowdhury

    If only I could borrow your mind for a day!
    This is poignantly brilliant! 💚💚

  11. Varsha Avatar
    Varsha

    A good notion. Thank-you for this sweet words. An insight. An inspiration.

  12. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Moonmoon. 😃
    Thank you, Moonmoon and Varaha

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