A tendril of smoke
rises into nothingness
From a cigarette
that empties itself out.
Like thoughts from a broken heart
Emptiness
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12 responses to “Emptiness”
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Short and just right, Jaya.
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Thanks 💚
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A great metaphor.💚
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Wow! Spoke volumes without telling anything.💚💚💚
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Thanksss!
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Wow 👌👌
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🤩 wowww!
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Wow! Just beautiful 🙂
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Thanks so much 💚
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If only I could borrow your mind for a day!
This is poignantly brilliant! 💚💚 -
A good notion. Thank-you for this sweet words. An insight. An inspiration.
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Moonmoon. 😃
Thank you, Moonmoon and Varaha
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