An Infinite Whisper

A fragile dew drop, I gripped the weed,

Through the night, on cold I feed,

My wait, you ended, with your morning ray,

With one touch, I shone as diamonds spray.

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My bearing core, lay silent entombed,

Arid earth, kept me barren, alone,

My wait, you ended, with monsoon spree

You soaked me soft, as I sprouted free.

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My boundaries caged me, I stayed confined,

Limited my reach, I towed the shore line,

My wait, you ended, with a full moon night,

My waves soared high, to catch your light.

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Restrained, unexplored, my depths unseen,

Talents, gifts, lay dormant, lean,

My wait, you ended, with a whisper so soft,

Unfurled my persona, a lotus, well sought.

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As I rewind, reflect behind,

Wonder life course, in the hindsight,

Gratitude overwhelms, my inner core,

How that one whisper, opened infinite doors!

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26 responses to “An Infinite Whisper”

  1. True… Sometimes all it takes is a whisper to take us forth

    1. True…for me the whisper echoes infinitely as I am now linked to the light ..JGD !!

  2. Beauuutiful poem, dear friend. Love the glimpse of divine in your poems( and the depth and impeccable rhyming). May you stay blessed forever.

    1. Where one person sees surface reflections …the other one sees infinite depths..u are a soul with a soft, golden heart to see the divine ๐Ÿ’š

  3. Beautiful! I love the philosophy behind the vivid imagery. ๐Ÿ’š

    1. A poets words get fulfilled, once a satiated reader calls it a full bodied work. How wonderful to have this terse art, where words written as fragment fractions add up to make a whole.

  4. Silence makes the most noise๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š
    Whisper louder than the voice๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š
    Beautiful

    1. Wow friend ..so true your words ..silence often made people deaf ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’šlove your imagery

  5. Beautifully expressed!!

  6. Lovely poem Aradhna… I can feel each and every verse you have written in me… the last lines are simply divine and hold so much truth in them.

    1. So happy that We feel connected ..the guiding light made our paths cross and now we journey inspiring and enriching each other

  7. Beautiful read Aradhna๐Ÿ’š

  8. What a beautiful piece of poetry ! Mesmerised

  9. Aradhna it is a very beautiful piece,โค๏ธ. We wait for many more.

  10. Gratitude for the divine mentor so beautifully expressed ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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