Excursion of Repentance

One fine day, when my soul is set free,

When this world has taken away, all it gave me.

When I have breathed my last, debts repaid,

a small excursion, to rewind, I crave.

My core devoid of inhibitions, wants to visit,

those cemented by-lanes and that lazy rivulet.

He, who sold balloons β€˜n candies for a rupee,

and soak my swollen ankles in the warm camaraderie.

I have to visit my home, just round the corner,

where lights are always switched on, in my honour.

Just a little peep to see, my wailing parents

who lost their daughter, to her aberrants.

My excursion shall never be complete,

childhood love is all I seek.

Creepily I shall tiptoe in, contend just to see him.

Only if life could rewind, these stinging memories wouldn’t be prime.

Moved beyond the realms of return,

A visit to a life, forsaken and forlorn.
By:

Dr.Shweta Mathur Lall

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32 responses to “Excursion of Repentance”

    1. Thanks Sai.. so happy you liked it.

    1. Thanks for your appreciation, I value your words .

    1. Thanks a pile Pooja … truly exhilarated to have your appreciation.

  1. Beautiful…. πŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Such a poignant, heartbreaking poem. Beautifully written, dear Shweta. πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Moonmoon when you appreciate my poetry I truly feel joyful πŸ’š

  3. Poignant and beautifully written πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Nikita.. so happy you liked itπŸ’š

  4. Haunting and beautiful. πŸ’š

    1. Sanjukta.. thanks dear for traversing my memory lanes..πŸ’š

    1. Gratitude for aligning with my feelingsπŸ’š

  5. Poignancy at its best.. beautifully written..πŸ’š

    1. Thanks a pile for your warm wordsπŸ’š

    1. Thanks for reading and your appreciation πŸ’š

    1. Thanks a pile for spending your times in my memory lanes.

  6. This is such a beautiful and heartfelt piece of poetry

  7. Simply beautiful πŸ’šπŸ’š

      1. Thanks for your warm words πŸ’š

    1. Your appreciation is valuedπŸ’š

  8. Ah, such a touching poem!

    1. Ma’am , your appreciation is valuable for me πŸ’š gratitude.

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