So, Can You Hear Me?

I have crash landed,

In the abysmal quicksand of my own sins.

It is now devouring me little by little,

Sans mercy, sans redemption.

 

The gossamer of lies that I had spinned throughout my life,

Had long ago shaken the ground beneath my feet.

And the megalomaniac in me,

Had further spiraled the antithesis of trust, love, and hope in my life.

 

I had bullied and battered,

Shaken and shattered the trusting ones.

And now, like a tired and petrified lone ranger,

Desperately seeking for one kind smile, one trusting face.

 

I had half smiled, half cried, half lived, half loved,

Always keeping the other half for scrutiny.

But had always hated fully with hell-bent stubbornness,

Puking vengeance even on understandably unintentional slights.

 

Still the mirage of hope keeps appearing,

Flickering my wish to do things right this time.

The crash couldn’t crush this one final wish to be heard, for a second chance.

So, can you hear me?

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17 responses to “So, Can You Hear Me?”

  1. Heard you girl. Profound๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thanks sonali๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  2. Oh wow Indrani ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š
    As @sonali said, this is profound

    1. Thanks Nikita- thanks for reading it and giving your opinion about it.I know that I can count on you people๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  3. Profound! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ‘

  4. Nice poem and wish too,if it is sincere .

  5. Nicely penned and yes profound

  6. Wooow! What a superb poem! I love the protagonist you have created in your poem, who has lived a life of sins and now seeks to make the wrongs right. Can people he has wronged give him another chance? A powerful poem, written wonderfully.

  7. Cry for the redemption of one’s wrong-doings, the need to be given one last chance…beautifully expressed.

  8. Beautiful… The realization.. And the wish to do things right…

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