We Women !

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The epitome of quintessence, a woman

Slacklining on difficult terrains

Even on heavy flow days

Encapsulating jillions of happiness 

You are a superwoman.

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Shielded guardianship along personal success

Mother tolerates her lost dreams repressed

Still floating like lilies in cerulean waters

Buoyantly streamlining across misogynists knotter

You are a superwoman.

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On thunderous cloudy days

Cushioning me in your arms with lays 

Sisters spinning mystic webs with love

Respect my needs and her aspirations behove

You are a superwoman.

Flickering flames of joys along hula

Our immensely inflated nebula

Engaging dinner dates for family

Daughters shining even in marked obscurity 

You are a superwoman.

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Spilling tiny secrets reform

Of nurturing numerous life forms

Granny passing on traditions enthrall

Lively she sparks as unplugged waterfalls

You are a superwoman.

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Summer holidays ecstasy 

When we go to visit naani 

Impeccable mixed feelings tinkling

Love your distinctive inklings 

You are a superwoman.

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Struggling with scarred imperfections 

Lighting up just when needed with affection 

Like the magical heal of sun rays 

Conceding the adversary with embrace

You are a superwoman.

Ketki Jalan 

Picture- Unsplash 

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24 responses to “We Women !”

    1. Thank you Maam
      Mean a lot

  1. Each category mentioned in your verse: mother sister granny, daughter. A lovely piece Ketki.

    1. Mumtaz your eye for details.Thank you so much

  2. A beautiful tribute!

    1. Maam
      Thank you so much

  3. Love the vocabulary, the lyrical feel and content of your poem, dear Ketki๐Ÿ˜

    1. Thank you so much dear Natasha

  4. Such a beautiful tribute. ๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thank you so much Moonmoon

  5. Loved it dear…. Very well expressed

  6. Beautiful and true๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thank you so much Kirti

    1. Thank you so much Pooja

  7. We women.are jack of all trades and even master of all.The tasks never ends but we do it …we are superwomen.Beautiful poem๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thank you so much Indrani

  8. Endless chores the women do. I like the words you choose.

    1. Thank you so much Maam

  9. Beautifully written ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thank you so much Nitika

  10. Loved your vocabulary and vivid portrayal.๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thank you so much Gowri

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