Floating friendless,

On the tumultuous waves

Of life…

Serenaded by the blasphemous sorrow

Of transient victories,

Humiliated by the discordant dance

of mutilated dreams,

And, encircled by the emphatic assertion

of chastising fear…

You slip into an unrelenting vortex,

Of pitiless yesterdays…

Buoyant oxygen, depleting…

Bit by bit by bit…

You bow down 

To the familiar foe…

Mourning the irreversible loss.

And then, a soothing voice 

offers a life jacket.

Like a wise counsellor,

It whispers into your ear…

‘You have it in you’

A small smile supplants your tears,

Warm bubbles replace the cold sheet

Blanketing your heart,

And you gather the scattered will,

To stand up. Yet again.

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Photo credit : Sam Moqadam (unsplash.com)

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  1. So deep and beautiful, my dear! Again the choice of words, wow!👏Absolutely loved these last lines- “A small smile supplants your tears,Warm bubbles replace the cold sheetBlanketing your heart,And you gather the scattered will”💚💚

    1. Thanks so much, dear Pooja. Your words of encouragement mean a lot.💚💚💚

  2. To stand up again. Beautiful.

    1. Thank you so much, dear ma’am. 💚💚💚

  3. I think it’s time you pen an e book darling

    1. Thanks for the encouragement, dear Natasha. They will motivate me to better myself. 💚💚💚

  4. Beautiful and powerful Moonmoon! and what a vocabulary 🙂

    1. Thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement, dear Nitika💚💚💚

  5. Wow! In awe of this one Moonmoon.

    1. Thank you for the kind encouragement, dear Sheetal. 💚💚💚

    1. Thank you, dear Indrani 💚💚💚

    1. Thank you, dear Sai. 💚💚💚

  6. Such amazing choice of words. Your poetry flows like a river. Beautiful dear💚

    1. Thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement, dear Gowri. 💚💚💚

    1. Thank you so much for the kind encouragement, dear Amrita. 💚💚💚

    1. Thank you, dear Kirti💚💚💚

  7. Just amazed at how you pen your thoughts, beautiful verse and an equally amazing play of words. Just in awe💚💚💚

    1. Thanks so much for the warm words of appreciation, my dear. Means a lot. 💚💚💚
      Your poems abd the imagery you use always leave me spellbound. 💚

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