Bathing the shiny thread in scarlet hue

I tied it around the image cherished,

Adding imaginary letters few

The venerated word, I embellished.

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His radiant countenance I summoned

Levitating above the earthly home,

In starry sky, the sketch I envisioned

Savouring the delight of polychrome.

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The call of duty, shattered the stupor

The descent was sudden, a heavy blow,

Tangled fantasy was left in tatters

Yielding a resounding triumph to woe.  

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The defiant seesaw of  dreamy  heart

Sculpts sweet paradise, and tears it apart.  

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Picture credit : Jiroe (unsplash.com)

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22 responses to “Yet again”

  1. Wow! Loved the last two lines.

  2. Oh, the last line! Breaks the heart. Beautiful, Moon girl.

  3. So beautiful. In awe of your verses💚

    1. Thank you for the kind words, dear Gowri. 💚💚And, I am in awe of yours. 💚

  4. Whimsical seesaw… Double chaand… Badiya❤❤❤

    1. Hahaha… Dhanyawaad, Kirti dear 💚💚💚

    1. Thank you so much, dear Amrita. 💚💚💚

  5. Superb write Moonmoon! Loved the first stanza.

    1. Thank you so much, dear Vandana, for the encouragement. <3 <3 <3

    1. Thank you so much, ma’am. <3 <3 <3

  6. Marvellous my doublechaand💚💚💚
    Speechless😍😍😍

    1. Thanks for the kind words, dear Sonali. <3 <3 <3 Your poems render me speechless.

  7. You my dear slay it every time..this is so beautiful Moonmoon and those last lines hit hard

    1. You are too kind, dear Natasha. <3 <3 <3 Thank you so much for liking it.<3

  8. Amazing lines… Loved the opening stanza

    1. Thank you so much, Vishwanathan. 🙂

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