Yet again

Bathing the shiny thread in scarlet hue

I tied it around the image cherished,

Adding imaginary letters few

The venerated word, I embellished.

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His radiant countenance I summoned

Levitating above the earthly home,

In starry sky, the sketch I envisioned

Savouring the delight of polychrome.

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The call of duty, shattered the stupor

The descent was sudden, a heavy blow,

Tangled fantasy was left in tatters

Yielding a resounding triumph to woe.  

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The defiant seesaw of  dreamy  heart

Sculpts sweet paradise, and tears it apart.  

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Picture credit : Jiroe (unsplash.com)

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22 responses to “Yet again”

  1. Wow! Loved the last two lines.

    1. Thank you, Dear Anuradha. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Oh, the last line! Breaks the heart. Beautiful, Moon girl.

    1. Thanks so much, dear Srivalli. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. So beautiful. In awe of your versesπŸ’š

    1. Thank you for the kind words, dear Gowri. πŸ’šπŸ’šAnd, I am in awe of yours. πŸ’š

  4. Whimsical seesaw… Double chaand… Badiya❀❀❀

    1. Hahaha… Dhanyawaad, Kirti dear πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you so much, dear Amrita. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  5. Superb write Moonmoon! Loved the first stanza.

    1. Thank you so much, dear Vandana, for the encouragement. <3 <3 <3

  6. Lovely,beautiful language.

    1. Thank you so much, ma’am. <3 <3 <3

  7. Marvellous my doublechaandπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š
    Speechless😍😍😍

    1. Thanks for the kind words, dear Sonali. <3 <3 <3 Your poems render me speechless.

  8. You my dear slay it every time..this is so beautiful Moonmoon and those last lines hit hard

    1. You are too kind, dear Natasha. <3 <3 <3 Thank you so much for liking it.<3

    1. Thank you, ma’am. <3 <3 <3

  9. Amazing lines… Loved the opening stanza

    1. Thank you so much, Vishwanathan. πŸ™‚

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