Moonmoon Chowdhury
Bathing the shiny thread in scarlet hue
I tied it around the image cherished,
Adding imaginary letters few
The venerated word, I embellished.
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His radiant countenance I summoned
Levitating above the earthly home,
In starry sky, the sketch I envisioned
Savouring the delight of polychrome.
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The call of duty, shattered the stupor
The descent was sudden, a heavy blow,
Tangled fantasy was left in tatters
Yielding a resounding triumph to woe.
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The defiant seesaw of dreamy heart
Sculpts sweet paradise, and tears it apart.
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Picture credit : Jiroe (unsplash.com)
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Wow! Loved the last two lines.
Thank you, Dear Anuradha. 💚💚💚
Oh, the last line! Breaks the heart. Beautiful, Moon girl.
Thanks so much, dear Srivalli. 💚💚💚
So beautiful. In awe of your verses💚
Thank you for the kind words, dear Gowri. 💚💚And, I am in awe of yours. 💚
Whimsical seesaw… Double chaand… Badiya❤❤❤
Hahaha… Dhanyawaad, Kirti dear 💚💚💚
Great 14 lines superb
Thank you so much, dear Amrita. 💚💚💚
Superb write Moonmoon! Loved the first stanza.
Thank you so much, dear Vandana, for the encouragement. <3 <3 <3
Lovely,beautiful language.
Thank you so much, ma’am. <3 <3 <3
Marvellous my doublechaand💚💚💚
Speechless😍😍😍
Thanks for the kind words, dear Sonali. <3 <3 <3 Your poems render me speechless.
You my dear slay it every time..this is so beautiful Moonmoon and those last lines hit hard
You are too kind, dear Natasha. <3 <3 <3 Thank you so much for liking it.<3
Beautiful images!
Thank you, ma’am. <3 <3 <3
Amazing lines… Loved the opening stanza
Thank you so much, Vishwanathan. 🙂