The wind has been too kind

Like the intervention, of Divine

It swiftly, flew past me

And gave me a moment of ecstacy

A stranger just passed by

An unexpected smile, we cast thy

.

Moments later

It swayed faster, with a thudding sound

Made many men, homebound

Topsy turvy, it turned the trees

Snatched the life of several leafs

A little further, it had thrown ripened fruits

All ready, for human-loot

.

Settling the dust on sides

Turning the sky, pellucid-bright

Ushering in a fresh set of thoughts

The wind, didn’t tell aloud, what all it had brought!

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Image credit: Simon John-McHaffie (Unsplash)

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15 responses to “Wind”

  1. Loved it. The journey of winds. None knows what it brings! I had written such a poem on clouds, don’t know where it is now. If I get I’ll post it. I loved your expression of smiling at unknown faces, scattered ripened fruits, detached leaves… 👌👌 perfect💚

  2. Thankyou so much Sonali 💚 💚 You’ve written a whole poem in the first two sentences, you talented lady 😉

    1. 😍💚🤗🙈
      Same to you aspiring poetess!💚

  3. Unpredictable wind ,beautifully expressed

  4. Last line takes the prize.. Beautifully written.

  5. Thanks a lot Sai for reading and appreciating 💚💚

  6. Love how you describe nature. Beautiful poem. 💚💚

  7. Loved the imagery. Felt like I myself was being carried by the winds. Beautiful

    1. Hey Natasha, Thanks a lot 🙂 Glad you liked it <3

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