loving you opened up spaces within me I did not know existed
multiplying happy cells into spasms of joy that traversed my entire system
survived a storm of mundane sensory gaps of living a life lost in illusionary awareness
to a path that transformed me from bit to whole from living to loving
I need to edit this poem. Can anybody help please?
Thank you Sonali!
Yes you can edit
Go to your profile, you get an option to see your posts, below every post there are three dots
Click on that, you will get an option to edit.
Edit it and click on publish
Thank you Nikita. It was a great help.
*Nitika!
Nice, write a longer version.
Yes Sarita. I will. I did think about it. Thank you.
Love the cover pic
Google. Not work. Was hoping to use my work. I suppose I shall use it some.day.
Wow! I’m kinda a transformed by your verse. I loved the crisp language .
Beautiful.. Loved the opening line
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