Weight of vacuum

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Strange, how things that ceased to be,

Did not give up their gravity.

The pressing burdens, that were brought

By weightless memory and thought.

  

Weird, the workings of a beating heart.

In a trice, it’s ceaseless rhythm, it forgot.

What had streamlined an ocean’s course,

Was crushed by an empty void’s force.

  

©Sai

23/1/21

Pic credit: Paweł Czerwiński (Unsplash)

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8 responses to “Weight of vacuum”

  1. This is so poignant, Sai. Gave me goosebumps. Loved it. 💚

  2. Oof! Brilliant with a hard hitting ending. That’s you, Sai. Pure brilliance expected.

  3. Simply wow… the thought and the composition

  4. Stunning creation.💚💚 awed🥰

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