The "I" in Invincible Me!

I’m not an eroded grain  

but the rugged mountain

strong and intricate

I hide the world’s echoes

within me,

you scaled me and 

reached the zenith

as I lost 

my fragmented rocks

grit by grit,

everyday!

****

I’m not a drop but 

the swelling crystal ocean

unstoppable, indestructible

calm also stormy

concealing the 

discarded wisdom

in my depth 

birthing a pearl

everyday

yet

my surges fall flat

crashing at your feet

crawling like a toddler

in hope of nothingness!

****

I’m not just a breeze

soothing the soul

letting the past shed

but a summer storm

a hurricane

swallowing the slime

building my strength

only

to lash with a 

greater force and undo

the miseries, sufferings!

****

I’m not just any 

ordinary woman

but the glowing Sun

unconquered, unvanquished

I rise with hope

everyday,

illuminating your 

dark skies

yet 

you mistake me

as the silent, pearly orb

forgetting its ability

to drown the world!

Picture Courtesy: Google 

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18 responses to “The "I" in Invincible Me!”

  1. Beautiful! Love your choice of words.πŸ™‚

  2. Phenomenal! This gies in my collection.

  3. Loved the last line!! Subtly put and yet …!!!

  4. Lovely ❀❀❀

  5. Glad you loved it @kirtivπŸ’ši

  6. @jaya ma’am thanks so much! Your words mean a lotπŸ’šπŸ’š

  7. @sai-surve-rane aww! Thanks so much dear. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  8. Lovely expressions, dear@sonaliπŸ’šπŸ’š

  9. Loved the expression subtle yet real

  10. Wow! I loved it so much, the last line was so impacting that I read the whole poem again. One of your best, and also the one that I’ll always remem.

  11. I’m so happy that it resonated with youπŸ’š
    Thanks, desireπŸ’š

  12. Your writing is invincibleπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’™

  13. πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒ πŸ’š

  14. Wonderfully written. A very impactful poem.

  15. Thanks MoonmoonπŸ’š

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