The girl from yesterday

When the din of the day wanes

And the chores are all checked-off

When the sun recedes to the west

Embracing heaven and earth

As the day meets the night

In the sublime twilight glow

I rewind to another time

Bypassing present’s flow

I navigate the lanes

Of a rugged, distant land

Desolate and grey

Stripped of  whiff of warmth

By an ancient rusty door

She stands, forlorn and blue

Wrinkles of angst and doubt

Conceal her core’s true  clue

In whispers, she recounts

Tales of bitter words and blame

Of her long-standing combat

With battered confidence

The languorous hands of time

Test her endurance and strength

Teary-eyed, she staggers

To  yet another day

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32 responses to “The girl from yesterday”

  1. Beautiful poem MoonmoonπŸ’š

    1. Thank you for reading, Meha. I am so glad that you liked my attempt.πŸ’š

  2. Lovely.. Transported me too

    1. Thank you for reading, ma’am. I appreciate your comment. πŸ’š

  3. Soul stirringπŸ’š Nostalgic moments. Lovely.

    1. Thanks for reading, Shweta. I am so glad that the poem struck a chord with you. πŸ’š

  4. Beautiful! Very well written πŸ’š πŸ’š

    1. Thank you for reading, Nitika. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. πŸ’š

  5. Beautiful… Nostalgic…

    1. Thank you for reading, Kirti. I am so glad you liked my attempt . πŸ’š

  6. I was eagerly awaiting your entry like always. Its so beautiful bondhu ! I just love it πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you for reading, bondhu. I am so touched to hear that you were waiting to read my poem. Your words of encouragement mean a lot. πŸ’š

  7. The words are touching. Hope it is a creative expression with lil or no truth in it . Each soul is too precious to ever visit those dark alleys and suffer. πŸ’š

    1. Thank you for reading, dear friend. I am touched by your affectionate care. However, sometimes, visiting the dark alleys from the past and journaling them also tells us how far we have come. πŸ’šπŸ’š

  8. Aww! This is so lovely, Moonmoon. Took me back in time too.πŸ’š

    1. Thanks for reading, my dear friend. Your sweet words will be treasured. πŸ’š

  9. Beautiful poem, moonmoon! Very well writtenπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you for reading, my dear. I am touched by your love and support, at all times. It means so much to me. πŸ’š

  10. Words are imbued with melancholy and nostalgia… Beautifully penned Moonmoon. Loved the lines when the sun recedes to the west, embracing heaven n earth..

    1. Thanks for reading, Roodaba. Your kind encouragement means a lot to me. Grateful. πŸ’š

  11. Ah! The jingles of those alleys still ring inside meπŸ’š
    Beautiful doublechandπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š
    Waiting to read more of your emotions, dil mangey moree😍

    1. Thanks for reading, dear friend. And, for the encouragement. I shall try to write a sequel to this, for your lovely, kind β€˜dilβ€™πŸ˜€πŸ’š

  12. The dark alley is described so beautifully Moonmoon Chowdhury, loved your poem. ❀️Was awaiting your piece.

    1. Thanks so much for reading, Mumtaz. I am ecstatic to read that you were waiting to read my poem. πŸ€—I shall cherish your kind and encouraging words. πŸ’š

    1. Thank you for reading, Gowri. πŸ’šHappy that you liked it.

  13. Brilliantly penned, Moonmoon. The pain, the angst of the woman is expressed so vividly.

    1. Thank you for reading, ma’am and for the kind encouragement. I shall treasure your commentπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  14. Lovely. Each word has its depth. So beautifully penned. πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thanks you for reading and the comment comment, Geeta. Really appreciate it. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  15. Reminiscing wistfully ,beautifully

    1. Thanks so much for reading and the lovely comment, ma’am. Really appreciate it. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

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