Sarcastic Sorry!

Thankyou she said –

Every time they allowed her, to step out

Every time they applauded her, in a crowd

Gratitude she expressed –

For every freedom granted

For every wish accepted

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But all this only till, realization dawned

When she understood, she was beyond

Free to live, the way she desired

No permission, no rules, she required

That was when, she carved a new story

To every rule laid, she said a sarcastic Sorry!

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Image Credit: Tai’s Captures

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Day 2: #NaPoWriMo21

Theme: Start the poem with with Thankyou and end with Sorry!

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12 responses to “Sarcastic Sorry!”

  1. Wow, simply wow! Powerful poem, Nitika. Loved it. πŸ’š

  2. This is so good, Nitika. A lesson for all of us.

  3. You are an awesome poeta… this Is classic..πŸ’š

  4. This is superb… strong powerful and sorry I am not sorry

  5. This was amazing! Better late than never πŸ™‚ Lovely poem

  6. A strong message. Wow! So nicely written πŸ’š

  7. Loved the message Nitika.

  8. Superb take…awesome poetess you are indeed

  9. So powerful. Impactful words nitikaπŸ’šπŸ’š
    Too good

  10. A bold step has to be taken

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