Quelling the voice of self-doubt

The deafening sound echoed high and low,

Choking footprints of faith and confidence,

Apprehension besieged, rendered a blow,

Throttling the vestiges of her essence.

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 Social commandment, crippling, deep-rooted,

Banished her merit as a close second,

Taunting her aspirations, vile, ill-suited,

 ‘Sheltered domestic domain’, it reckoned.

The yearning deep, surfaced recurrently,

Rescuing her from quicksand of self-doubt,

Forging close bonds, she marched determinedly,

Reaching for the stars,  via  her carved route. 

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22 responses to “Quelling the voice of self-doubt”

  1. What a stunning creation, dear💚💚So poignantly written. Absolutely loved the last line👌👍

    1. Thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement, dear Pooja. Means a lot. 💚💚💚

    1. Thank you ma’am 😄🙏💚💚

    1. Thank you so much, ma’am💚💚💚

  2. Beautiful…”Rescuing her from quicksand of self-doubt” – I was thinking something around this theme yesterday:)

    1. Thank you so much, dear Amrita.
      You write with so much depth. I would love to read your take on the quicksand of self-doubts, someday. 💚💚💚

  3. So wonderful, Moonmoon dear. And that last line..oof! Too good. Carry on, on your path. We are your ardent fangirls.

    1. Thank you so much for the encouragement, dear Natasha. 💚💚💚 Means a lot. And, I have always been your fangirl. Love how you write with so much wit and humour.

  4. Lovely poem Moonmoon

    1. Thank you so much, dear Ketki💚💚💚

  5. A woman’s evolution, wow, your words are very impactful!

    1. Thank you so much for the encouragement, dear Mumtaz. 💚💚💚 Means a lot.

  6. Loved it Moonmoon. Indeed, self doubt can truly pull one down.

    1. Thank you so much, dear Sheetal. So happy you liked it💚💚💚

  7. Moonmoon that’s a lovely creation… It’s really awesome 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

    1. Thank you for the warm appreciation, dear Kirti. Means a lot 💚💚💚

  8. Wonderful rhyming and alliteration, delightful read.💚💚

    1. Thank you so much for the encouragement, dear Roodaba. Means a lot. 💚💚💚

  9. Such a lovely creation of yours. “ reaching for the stars via her carved rooute”- simply marvelous

    1. Thank you for the kind words of encouragement, dear Gowri. Means a lot. 💚💚💚

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