ArtoonsInn

Pause

—

by

Sai
in

A little exercise-

  

  

  

Let not blank spaces paralyze.

  

  

  

Empty the moment bit by bit

   

   

   

And let more emptiness fill it…

   

   

   

For in that blank, black pause

    

    

   

A tiny flicker will catch your sight

    

    

   

That was shadowed, in blinding frenzy of lights.

    

   

    

©Sai

16/1/21

Pic credit: Sai Rane

Leave your vote

9 Points
Upvote Downvote

Browse and manage your votes from your Member Profile Page

More
  • Report

Comments

8 responses to “Pause”

  1. Gowri Bhargav Avatar
    Gowri Bhargav

    Such a wonderful poem. Filled with meaningfulness

  2. Moonmoon Chowdhury Avatar
    Moonmoon Chowdhury

    Beautiful poem, Sai. 💚💚💚

  3. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
    Natasha Sequeira

    Profound!

  4. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    This is a superb one! Loved it 💚

  5. Sheetal Ashpalia Avatar
    Sheetal Ashpalia

    Food for thought!

  6. Sonali Ray Avatar
    Sonali Ray

    Wonderful. Loved it💚

  7. Pooja Mandla Avatar
    Pooja Mandla

    Profound💚💚

  8. Mumtaz N K Avatar
    Mumtaz N K

    What a beautiful composition.I truly admire your knack with words.

Leave a Reply

Log In

Don't have an account? Register

Forgot password?

Enter your account data and we will send you a link to reset your password.

Your password reset link appears to be invalid or expired.

Log in

Privacy Policy

Add to Collection

No Collections

Here you'll find all collections you've created before.