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Oliver Is Twisted.

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Natasha Sequeira
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#AZatPP  #day15  #LetterO

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Oliver is twisted!

He took Marie’s photograph,

And he did kiss it.

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He pulled Etty’s pigtails,

Punched her,

And made her wail.

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On Sunday, he woke up early.

He dropped the milk pail,

Of poor little Shirley.

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But out in the alley,

Oliver was accosted

By these three girlies.

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They hit him, Bam! Pow! Wham!

Oliver has now been ‘un-twisted’,

Thanks to these powerful little M’ams.

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27 responses to “Oliver Is Twisted.”

  1. Gowri Bhargav Avatar
    Gowri Bhargav

    Very cute and entertaining poem💚

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Thanks Gowri. Happy you liked it:)

      1. Jaya Pillai Avatar
        Jaya Pillai

        Smart girls.. I love them

        1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
          Natasha Sequeira

          Thanks Jaya dear💚

          1. Pooja Mandla Avatar
            Pooja Mandla

            Too good👌👌👌👍

  2. Pradnya Surve Avatar
    Pradnya Surve

    Natasha, love your humorous takes

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Thanks so much Pradnya:)

      1. Jaya Pillai Avatar
        Jaya Pillai

        Natasha.. You should seriously consider am anthology of fun poems.. You are too good 😀

        1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
          Natasha Sequeira

          Jaya💚
          I guess I could try a small e-book. Thanks so much for the encouragement. Means a lot.

  3. Sarita Khullar Avatar
    Sarita Khullar

    Such twisted boys need whacking. Humorous as ever

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Right Sarita M’am. All children need to be put on the right track at the right time. Thanks for liking it.😍

  4. Kirti V Avatar
    Kirti V

    Hilarious 💚💚 i like your humorous ones🤣🤣

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Thanks Kirti dear. Watch out for letter P tomorrow😂

  5. Nitika Sawhney Avatar
    Nitika Sawhney

    So entertaining! Beautiful tale of naughty kids!

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Thanks so much Nitika. Glad you enjoyed it😍

  6. Amrita Chowdhury Avatar
    Amrita Chowdhury

    Haha! Such a powerful message for young girls in a cute style!

  7. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
    Natasha Sequeira

    Thanks Amrita. Indeed, I wished to focus on girl power in a different manner. Thanks for appreciating.

  8. Moonmoon Chowdhury Avatar
    Moonmoon Chowdhury

    Super poem, Natasha. 💚💚
    And, I so agree with Jaya ma’am. Do think about the book idea. 💚

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      💚💚💚💚 You are a sweetheart, Moonmoon Chowdhury.

  9. Charulata Panigrahi Avatar
    Charulata Panigrahi

    The humor poet you Natasha.

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Thanks so much Charulata M’am💚

  10. Sai Avatar
    Sai

    Serves twisted Oliver right! He reminds me of Georgie Porgie

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Hehe, yes, Georgie Porgie and Oliver were both twisted.
      But in the former it was the boys that saved the day. Here my girls did the same.😍

  11. Sonali Ray Avatar
    Sonali Ray

    You and your humour💚💚💚
    What a funny verse😍😍

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Thanks Sonali dear

  12. Mumtaz N K Avatar
    Mumtaz N K

    I loved the pun, humour peppered with pun -the girls did a good job.

    1. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
      Natasha Sequeira

      Thanks so much, mumtaz

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