Mellow vibes

Without warning it happened,

Unconsciously I got involved,

Till my soul found no escape,

From that celestial feeling,

Intoxicating, beyond my control

A  gossamer soft silken strand,

Softly wrapping my whole being

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I surrendered to you, love,

With candour of  devotion

Couldn’t  read your Stygian mind,

Ecstatic I floated in mystic sky,

Till the maze of your honeyed words

Wore off and out stood ,

Sharp shingles of indifferent ..

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16 responses to “Mellow vibes”

  1. Mellow yet speaks of stirrings that are deep…

    1. Thanks Sai for understanding

  2. Very beautifuly written, such a poignant poem!

  3. Beautiful and poignant poem, ma’am. It is so terrible to be betrayed thus.

  4. Such beautiful portrayal of pain emanating from betrayal.💚

  5. The deep pain of betrayal comes through so beautifully…

  6. Betrayal expressed so beautifully
    It does hurt

  7. Ma’am such a deep meaning resides in your words.. lovely💚

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