Sarita Khullar<span class="bp-verified-badge"></span>
Without warning it happened,
Unconsciously I got involved,
Till my soul found no escape,
From that celestial feeling,
Intoxicating, beyond my control
A gossamer soft silken strand,
Softly wrapping my whole being
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I surrendered to you, love,
With candour of devotion
Couldn’t read your Stygian mind,
Ecstatic I floated in mystic sky,
Till the maze of your honeyed words
Wore off and out stood ,
Sharp shingles of indifferent ..
Mellow yet speaks of stirrings that are deep…
Thanks Sai for understanding
Very beautifuly written, such a poignant poem!
Thanks Nitika
Beautiful and poignant poem, ma’am. It is so terrible to be betrayed thus.
Thanks Moonmoon
WoWonderful ma’am.
Thanks Sonali
Such beautiful portrayal of pain emanating from betrayal.💚
Thanks Debashree
The deep pain of betrayal comes through so beautifully…
Thanks Jaya
Betrayal expressed so beautifully
It does hurt
Thanks Pradnya
Ma’am such a deep meaning resides in your words.. lovely💚
Thanks Dr. Shweta