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Love

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Sarita Khullar
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#AZatPP

#Day 12

#Letter L 

Liberate me love

From your fatal attraction ,

your magnetic lure.

Though tears seem to have dried out 

No more pain my heart can hold.

#Tanka 

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24 responses to “Love”

  1. Pooja Mandla Avatar
    Pooja Mandla

    Beautifully put, ma’am 💚💚

  2. Sarita Khullar Avatar
    Sarita Khullar

    Thanks Pooja

  3. Gowri Bhargav Avatar
    Gowri Bhargav

    Beautiful tanka ma’am

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Gowri

  4. Charulata Panigrahi Avatar
    Charulata Panigrahi

    Beautiful tanks.

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Charulata

  5. Nitika Sawhney Avatar
    Nitika Sawhney

    Poignant Mam!

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Nitika

  6. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
    Natasha Sequeira

    Fabulous Tanka on Love, Sarita M’am

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Natasha

  7. Moonmoon Chowdhury Avatar
    Moonmoon Chowdhury

    A very moving poem, ma’am 💚

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Moonmoon

  8. Shirstee Singh Avatar
    Shirstee Singh

    awesome

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Shristee

  9. Fatema Avatar
    Fatema

    💚💚💚all the love I can hold.. love this

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Fatema

  10. Kirti V Avatar
    Kirti V

    Beautiful ma’am

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Kirti

  11. Sheetal Ashpalia Avatar
    Sheetal Ashpalia

    Beautiful poem ma’am.

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Sheetal

  12. Sonali Ray Avatar
    Sonali Ray

    Awesome one ma’am. Love the tanka💚💚

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Sonali

  13. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Beautiful!

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Jaya

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