At the end of mirage street

I set up shop one day

Bits of broken promises

And famished love

Trinkets galore,

my tiny shop soon created a furore

The shop runs brisk

There is never a dull moment nigh

I sit quietly amidst my wares

As the miserable world passes by

Some lies I have sold for a higher price

Some come too cheap

I don’t care if they make you squirm

There are no promises, I keep

And then a mother walks in one day

Her eyes swollen with tears

I tried to sell a lie to her

But then I tremble with fear

For a mother’s heart knows only love

And all my lies burn up and die

I close my shop and sit afraid

I let the moment pass me by

-Rianka Bose Saha

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20 responses to “#Lies”

  1. Beautiful, poignant, touched my core. Its one poem, i shall be coming back to repeatedly.

  2. BeautifulπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. Poignant… Well expressed @rianka πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Rianka, poignant and touching. We humans live in a world full of lies and often miss out on true reality which is of higher value

  5. Beautiful! Expressed very well

  6. Beautifully penned …..
    An effortless way truth you be told and …
    Loved it

  7. So beautiful!! Adding this to my collection.. Loved it!

  8. Thank you all ! For some technical reason I am not to add individual comments to each of you πŸ™‚ thanking you for stopping by and reading it !

  9. Rianka, I loved your analogy, motherhood penned in such beauty!

  10. Beautiful, poignant poem. Loved it.

  11. This is so beautiful Rianka, very touching. The love of a mother surpasses everything.

  12. Poignant! Very well penned, dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

  13. Touching ,beautifully written
    # rulfy

  14. Wow! The final lines are very heart touching.You cannot sold lies to a mother as a mother’s heart knows only love. This is so so true. Truly enjoyed reading itπŸ’š

  15. Thank you every one πŸ™‚

  16. A beautiful poem! You managed to pack profound emotions in a few lines! Wonderful take on the prompt!

  17. So heart touching! Brilliant interpretation.

  18. What a beautiful poem, Rianka….Being regularly irregular at all writer’s places I am not familiar with most of the rules,prompts and poets but your name is one of the few I relate with soulful stuff! 😊😊 loved it! πŸ‘πŸ‘

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