Inside me!

Inside me

There’s a fire rage

Like the flames burning in a cage

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Inside me

There’s an ocean of tears

Like a closed pool of unknown fears

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Inside me

There’s disappointment

Like an injury without an ointment

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Inside me

There’s a corner hidden

Like a trunk heavily laden

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Inside me

There’s so much more

That I’m on the journey to explore!

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Inside me

There are unused smiles  

I’d bring back those when you return every mile!

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23 responses to “Inside me!”

  1. Inspiring poem, Nitika. You have described the power of the human spirit so beautifully. ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thanks a lot Moonmoon ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  2. True! Inside us there are many stories ๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thanks a lot Gowri ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  3. Loved it… inside me

    1. Thankyou Fatema ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

      1. Beautiful, touching lines!

  4. Wow๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š
    Painful and inspiring. Both simultaneously present inside you๐Ÿ˜

    1. Thankyou Sonali !! Glad to see your comprehension of it ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  5. An enigma. That’s what each human is. Beautiful

    1. Thankyou Natasha โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’š

  6. Inspiring ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  7. Thankyou Kirti ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  8. Inside me, there’s is so much more!๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ Beautiful it is!!๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thankyou Pooja ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  9. a whole world of emotions is right there inside … well expressed

    1. Thankyou so much Shristee ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  10. Wow, loved every word of the poem Nitika!

    1. Thankyou Sheetal ๐Ÿ’š so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ’š

  11. Profound thoughts and very well expressed

    1. Thanks Indrani ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

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