It flaps its eager wings
Pirouettes
Sipping a potion of valour
Erasing hurtful things
Silhouettes
Seeking radiance and colour
.
It was caged for ages
And silenced
‘Destiny’ branded on its coop
All buoyant images
Were distanced
Coercing sunny hope to stoop
.
Tyranny planted seed
Rebellious
It envisioned the distant sky
Uprooting fear’s weed
Poisonous
It traversed all hurdles to fly
.
Photo credit : Gerardo Alcolea (unsplash.com)
Thought provoking. I loved the flow of ideas and evocative imagery.
Thank you so much, dear Mumtaz, for the kind, encouraging words. 💚💚💚
Beautiful imagery! Loved the expressions!👌👌💚💚
Thank you so much, dear Pooja. 💚💚💚 So glad you liked the attempt.
Beautifully penned Moonmoon
Thank you, dear Sheetal. 💚💚💚 so glad you liked it.
Beautiful thoughts 💚. Love the words.
Thank you, dear Gowri. So glad you liked the poem. 💚💚💚
Thought provoking poem with beautiful imagery.
Beautifully written Moonmoon 💚💚 loved it.
Thank you so much for the warm appreciation, dear Nitika. Means a lot. 💚💚💚
Thank you so much for the encouragement, dear Sarita ma’am. Means a lot. 💚💚💚
Nice expression
Thank you so much, ma’am. 💚💚💚
Very thought provoking Moonmoon
Thank you so much, dear friend. 💚💚💚
Lovely imagery Moonmoon
Thank you, dear Kirti. <3 <3 <3
You are growing in leaps and bounds. Love your prowess. The words, the images they conjure up are vivid and thought provoking. Welll done, Moonmoon dear!💚💚💕
Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words, dear friend. Means a lot. I am so glad you liked the poem. Attempted the tri-fall poetry form as i wanted to follow a rhyme scheme. Yet to learn to rhyme like you do – naturally, effortlessly. <3 <3 <3
Wowwww💚💚💚💚
Breathtaking😍😍
Hahhaha… I have never received that compliment… I do not know if the poem deserves it but i will accept it gracefully, in case i never happen to receive it again. 🙂 🙂 <3 <3 <3 Thanks so much for the kind appreciation, dear Sonali.
So well penned Moonmoondi. Loved it 🙂
Thank you so much for your warm appreciation, dear Amrita. so pleased that you liked it. <3 <3 <3
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