Careless carol!

The luminous silver orb smiles, winter breeze stirs her heart 

By the surging brine, she waits every night for her beloved

Dawn, mermaid fades, her imprints glinting in sands, each grit sings her song!💚

*This form of poetry is called Sijo. It’s a Korean style with syllables 14-15-16 divided into three lines.  The theme like narrating a story with the first line describing the situation, second building the climax and third ending in a twist. Hope it’s fine!

PicCourtesy: pixabay

Leave your vote

More

Comments

10 responses to “Careless carol!”

  1. So picturesque and beautiful. 💚💚💚

    1. Thank you moonmoon💚

  2. Splendid..loved the last line..💚

  3. Painted a nice image💚💚💚

  4. So picturesque! 💚💚

  5. Beautiful and a new form learnt

Leave a Reply

Log In

Forgot password?

Don't have an account? Register

Forgot password?

Enter your account data and we will send you a link to reset your password.

Your password reset link appears to be invalid or expired.

Log in

Privacy Policy

Add to Collection

No Collections

Here you'll find all collections you've created before.