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Careless carol!

The luminous silver orb smiles, winter breeze stirs her heartย 

By the surging brine, she waits every night for her beloved

Dawn, mermaid fades, her imprints glinting in sands, each grit sings her song!๐Ÿ’š

*This form of poetry is called Sijo. It’s a Korean style with syllables 14-15-16 divided into three lines. ย The theme like narrating a story with the first line describing the situation, second building the climax and third ending in a twist. Hope it’s fine!

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