CAN YOU HEAR ME SHRIEK?

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From the womb of the barren earth

In the rumble of the cataclysmic quakes

That  flattens the skyscrapers and shanties alike

I wail in vain, proof of my chastity

For i am Sita

Can you hear me?

From the stony silence of the mountains

In the devastating deluge of an avalanche

That wipes away all remnants of my trespassers

I plead in mute agony my innocence

For i am Ahalya

Can you hear me?

From the alluring  casinos of Vegas

In the roll of the dice of destiny

That reduces a prince to  pauper

I rage against  the rape of my dignity

For i am Draupadi

Can you hear me?

From the shores of a foreign sea

In the devastating destruction of a tsunami

That washes away all traces of humanity

I lament in agony my abandonment

For i am Yashodara

Can you hear me?

From the gory pages of history

Written in blood tipped quills of patriarchy

In the strangulated  pleas of a Nirbhaya

I shriek and shriek and shriek

For i am every woman

Can you hear me?

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22 responses to “CAN YOU HEAR ME SHRIEK?”

  1. Fabulous girlπŸ‘Œ how beautifully you connected allπŸ’š
    Amazed at your play with words!πŸ’š

  2. Women everywhere had to pass through same plight . Nicely written

  3. Echo of indistinguished voices so very well conceptualized. Just awesomeπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Beautiful one indeed
    Women need to be heard since ages

  5. Wonderfully and lucidly illustrated how women has been MATRI NARI LAJJA across ages and how patriarchal society have been harsh..

  6. Beautiful poem Doel! It connects the dots so well!!

  7. So powerfully put!
    Kudos

  8. Such a power poem! πŸ‘πŸ‘ Brilliant pieceπŸ’šπŸ’š

  9. Wowwww, simply wowwwww! πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  10. Beautifully woven, Doel how well you have correlated Situation for women remains the same much as we talk about evolution,empowerment,equality

  11. Doel, this is so beautifully woven. Loved the concept and the execution

  12. Can there be anything that’s more ‘in your face’ and poignant ? Perfect choice of words and brilliant sequencing. πŸ’š

  13. From mythology to contemporary, you have connected gender issues brilliantly. Good job.

  14. Beautifully penned, Doel! I have always been irked by the shlok of ‘Pratah smarneeya panch kanya’ and why not, my Mom’s Dadi had a problem with that! So, it’s in blood. I had written about these 5 during my blogging days and had incorporated Nirbhaya too! To see them all in your poem made me happy to see more n more women empathizing and understanding the nuanced injustice of patriarchy. You have penned it with admirable sensitivity and softness. πŸ‘πŸ‘

  15. Deol ! loved your powerful poem. πŸ‘πŸ»

  16. Intriguing, I’m sure there are many more muted women whose silence awaits exploration. Too much that’s been swept under the carpet, in the name of selfish patriarchy.

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