Can you hear me?

Grey soot of melancholy
Meanders through my veins
Can you hear me?

Tears knock on the cracks
of my wearied soul
Can you hear me?

Serpentine thoughts derail
My mind is a mesh
Can you hear me?

Haphazard crinkled words
Battle with the din
Can you hear me?

The sun may go down
With no hope of a dawn
Can you hear me? 

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13 responses to “Can you hear me?”

  1. Yes yes! I’m there. Heard you girl, very my hπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ˜

  2. Poignant. A very important one during the Pandemic with depression rampant

  3. Heard you, dear! Poignant!πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. I have also heard you and loved your ideaπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  5. A plea full of longing and anguish. πŸ‘Œ

  6. We all hear you Moonmoon. From the heart!

  7. The angst of a depressed, stressed heart beautifully expressed.

  8. Poignant ..and reminding at the same time for being aware of people needing help

  9. Thank you Sonali, Nitika, Natasha, Pooja, Indrani, Sarita ma’am, Sheena, Shail, Seema ma’am and Aradhna for reading and commenting. Really appreciate it.

    1. Thank you so much, ma’am. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

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