Folding the blank paper
neatly along the rims
inking it with few
white salty drops
I sail it off,
My paper plane
into a distant land;
trudging over
the rugged terrain,
swimming the virgin
blues and emeralds,
plodding the lush
pastures and meadows,
when you reach
the window of his heart
drench him with the
shower of my words
bathe him till my
verse quench
his thirst;
As my paper plane
drifts over his heart
shedding my verse,
somewhere there
rather unknowingly
he absorbs my letters,
soaks himself like
the parched earth
dances to the
first raindrops,
and then I feel complete
seeping all my pains.
Flight of Words
Comments
45 responses to “Flight of Words”
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Love the word-paintings. A love-drenched poem is always a treat. ๐๐๐
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Thank you for your kind words. Means a lot๐
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So beautiful!!
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Thank you, Sai. You’re an inspiration.๐๐
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Oh Wow! Intense love. That was one beautiful poem I’ve read today.
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Thank you sweetie๐ฅฐ
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So beautiful…soulful and poignant!๐๐
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What a paper plane ! Better than a love letter.
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Thank you ma’am. Your appreciation means a lot.๐๐
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A beautiful imagination.. next poem must be the details of verses..let us be quenched and soaked ๐
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Will see๐๐
Now this encouragement is surely gonna bring out some rain-drenched words๐
Thank you so much for encouraging!๐
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Your poetries are so musical and so deep. Loved it, like all your works๐๐
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Thank you, dear. Am so glad that my humble efforts cheer you up. Thank you so much for liking it.๐๐๐
I too feel the same. Kashi is such a beautiful touching verse.๐
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Rain drenched wordings. Just beautiful.
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Thank you Natty girl ๐๐๐
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โค๏ธMonsoon and love have a long association, your love letter is petrichor.
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Love the love drenched letter
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Glad that you loved it๐
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Powerful and so well portrayed.
Can feel the emotions loaded with verses.
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Thank you so much, Esha๐๐
Glad you felt that๐ฅฐ๐
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This is a piece of beauty, doll.
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Good one Sonali.
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beautifully penned words of love
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Beautiful
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Thank you dear๐
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Just beautiful!
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A very beautiful poem
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I simply love the images you use! I fibd myself floating with your paper plane
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I’m honoured JP, hearing such appreciating words from you๐๐
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Awe!! A breathtaking Billet doux ๐๐๐
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Thanks Geeta๐๐
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Beautifully written Sonali Ray
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Thank you Ketki, means a lot.๐
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Profound poem.
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