One… two…many…

The flagrant fire seared her psyche,

Waiting was no longer a choice,

The serpentine road was spiky,

The flagrant fire seared her psyche.

She rode the jagged waves, quaky,

 Harnessing the power of her voice,

The flagrant fire seared her psyche,

Waiting was no longer a choice.

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The flagrant fire seared her psyche

She mourned the arbitrary lines

Wishful thinking was a bane

She stood up, took a stand

Brunt of barbs she bore

Others followed

Fellowmen

In tune

Roared!

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I have tried to use a triolet (an eight line poem that uses the rhyme scheme ABaAabAB) and a nonet (a nine line poem, that starts with nine syllables in the first line and ends with one syllable in the last line). Please let me know if the combination works.

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20 responses to “One… two…many…”

  1. Wow. Lovely poem and style

    1. Thank you so much, Natasha. <3 <3 <3

  2. Wow ! Ideas conveyed in two different styles

    1. Thank you, ma’am <3 <3 <3

  3. I think this one can be said as one of your best poems๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

  4. Wow I loved it. It flowed so beautifully – just too good.

    1. Thanks so much, Nitika. <3 <3 <3

    1. Thank you, Patricia. <3 <3 <3

  5. Fantastic! It’s written so meaningfully in the framework of two different poetic forms. Triolet is one of my favourite forms too ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thank you so much, Vandana. <3 <3 <3This is the first time I have written a triolet, wonder if i have done it correctly.

    1. Thank you so much, Anuradha. <3 <3 <3

    1. Thank you, ma’am <3 <3 <3

  6. Awesome expression in two styles with a nice flow

  7. Thank you so much, ma’am. <3 <3 <3

  8. Marvellous my God! Unique verse. ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

    1. Thank you, dear Sonali for your kind words. ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

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