Amrita Lahiri
Am I an aromatic rose
Melting in your abrasive palms?
Recurring raw dreams, I suppose-
Iconic smile rendering balm!
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Treasured friend cherished forever,
At times I retreat to silence,
Love for me is beyond measure,
And you can have full reliance!
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High in thoughts, less in slight debates,
Incidence of pearly mizzle,
Rampant chances to celebrate,
Imminent poetic drizzle!
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Will you not inscribe once my name?
Immortal my plea- not for fame!
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Beautiful. ‘… an aromatic rose melting in your abrasive arm’ is a unique expression.💚
Wooow… That’s really nice… Loved the acrostic
That’s one amazing acrostic, Amrita dear
Immortal ! Lovely!
Your verse has immortalized you my dear friend. Beautiful!
Lovely one Amrita!
How lovely!!
Stunning💚
Loved the acrostic
Awesome beginning lines