The Room On The Roof

it stands tall – the house – old, abandoned, dilapidated 

the lawn lies bereft and barren, 

once abuzz with birds, bees, and butterflies

today the trees stand still, silent, gloomy

I tread over the carpet of dry, dead leaves

the rusty teal blue door creaks as I push it open

like the fragile bones of the old woman who painted it

my grandmother – always exhausted but loving forever

the paint is dull and peeling off but little do I care 

.

I climb the ramshackle staircase and step inside

it’s dusty, dark, and stinks of pigeon droppings

the room on the roof – her bedroom, and mine too.

they assail me – a whiff of her body scent

her nasal voice, the lullabies she sang me

a gust of memories threaten to drown me 

panting for breath, I wrench the window open

she growls and slits my neck in a flash

just as I slit hers in a flash of fury, years ago.

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16 responses to “The Room On The Roof”

  1. Too sudden and startling a twist, I’m lost for words. Amazing!

    1. Thank you so much, Mumtaz!

  2. The eerie setting lead to a fitting climax. Very nice Seema.

  3. Wow this was too good! What a twist. Loved it 💚💚

    1. Thank you so much, Nitika. 💚💚 Are you also participating?

  4. Loved how you’ve described the setting. 💚💚And, the twist. 💚

  5. The setting, the descriptions, all most like a short film. So good

    1. Gracias, Natasha! 💚

  6. Never expected such a turn . Stunned

    1. Thank you so much, ma’am.

  7. Wow! Verse with a twist😀
    Lovely ma’am. 💚

    1. Thank you, dear! Just tried a different interpretation.

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