Don’t give Up!

Oh you little one! Don’t give up so soon.

Indeed, you can do it, go capture the moon.

Look into my eyes, don’t lower your lids,

Hold onto my hand, let me guide you, Kid!

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Cacophony of the machines, gives me solace,

Reassuring me of your presence, angel face.

Keep taking the baby steps towards life,

Let the life blood seep in your heart; survive!

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Each breath you inhale, oozes life in me

Fight my dear child, I wait for thee.

Slowly but surely , come back to your mother

Or take me too, across the horizon, to travel together.
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photo credit : Unsplash 

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15 responses to “Don’t give Up!”

  1. Poignant it is Shwetha. A mother’s love is so pure and boundless.

    1. Thanks for feeling it 💚💚 I so hope that they both make it through

  2. A loved one of mine recently lost a baby girl. It is and will always remain a life changing event for our family.
    This is well penned hits hard

    1. Awww… wishing her strength and love 💚

  3. This is so touching Shweta. Something that will well up every mother’s eye.

    1. You made my day.. if I was able to well up those emotions in you 💚

  4. Mother’s love well expressed 💚

    1. Thanks for feeling my emotions 💚

  5. So beautiful and so beautifully written, Shweta. Loved it. 💚

  6. Painful pleadings ..poignant feel

    1. Gratitude for feeling the pain.

  7. Loved it totally💚💚

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