Oh! How I Miss Touching God's Perfection

#Villanelle

Each passing day, I crave for your affection,

A glimmer of tears lines my eyes.

Oh! How I  miss touching God’s perfection!

My eyes, smitten and mesmerised by  your reflection.

My heart aches, and in heaviness sighs.

Each passing day, I crave for your affection.

Rubicund cheeks, lucid skin, Ah! What a complexion!

Alas! Nature’s way know no compromise.

Oh! How I miss touching God’s perfection!

Would that God granted my love,  I’d bend in genuflection

How like Faust, God’s will, my soul defies!

Each passing day,  I crave for your affection.

 O Mind! Lead not , thoughts towards defection!

Rage not, O Heart, quake not in abjection!

Each passing day, I crave for your affection,

Because I miss touching God’s perfection!

© Mumtaz N Khorakiwala

14-2-2021

Picture courtesy: Scott Broome

Unsplash.com

Leave your vote

More

Comments

8 responses to “Oh! How I Miss Touching God's Perfection”

  1. Last verse third line
    Rage not O Heart, utter a goodbye.

  2. Such a beautiful villanelle.
    Love this line : ‘How like Faust, God’s will, my soul defies!’ Brings out the helplessness of one-sided love so well.

  3. Thank you Sarita Khullar and Sonali Ray.❤️

  4. Loved reading this poem
    Beautifully written villanelle

  5. Truly beautiful, the longing and ache comes through, beautifully

Leave a Reply

Log In

Forgot password?

Don't have an account? Register

Forgot password?

Enter your account data and we will send you a link to reset your password.

Your password reset link appears to be invalid or expired.

Log in

Privacy Policy

Add to Collection

No Collections

Here you'll find all collections you've created before.