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Veni Vidi Vici

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Jaya Pillai
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Veni, vidi, vici

(  I came I  saw I conquered )

Like a storm unhindered,

We swoop down

Upon the flowers

We love

And claim them as our own.

It takes a  while

For us to learn,

That conquered flowers

Also wilt.

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12 responses to “Veni Vidi Vici”

  1. Mumtaz N K Avatar
    Mumtaz N K

    What a beautiful poem!

  2. Kirti V Avatar
    Kirti V

    Wow…

  3. Shirstee Singh Avatar
    Shirstee Singh

    lovely

  4. Moonmoon Chowdhury Avatar
    Moonmoon Chowdhury

    So profound. 💚

  5. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Thanks a lot 💚

  6. Pooja Mandla Avatar
    Pooja Mandla

    Wow! Amazing poem!

  7. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
    Natasha Sequeira

    Conquered flowers also wilt. Sigh. You hit hard with minimum words. Each and every time! Sigh

  8. Amrita Chowdhury Avatar
    Amrita Chowdhury

    Simply brilliant!

  9. Sonali Ray Avatar
    Sonali Ray

    Short, sweet, powerful and thought-provoking 💚💚💚

  10. Sarita Khullar Avatar
    Sarita Khullar

    A truth acknowledged

    1. Jaya Pillai Avatar
      Jaya Pillai

      Thanks a lot 💚 💚

  11. Sai Avatar
    Sai

    What a beautiful poem!!

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