Stellar Lantern

Stars

Fireball

Sky Lantern

Traveller’s Mate,

Dreams

This style is called the Lantern style in Japanese poetry. These poems usually don’t have a title, the first line is considered the title but I chose to give my verse a name💚

First line-one syllable

Second line-two syllable

Third line – three syllables

Fourth line – four syllables

Fifth line – One syllable( it should be a synonym of the first word or related to it)

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25 responses to “Stellar Lantern”

  1. Wow Sonali
    Thanks for introducing me to this style 💚💚

  2. Wow! Thanks for introducing this style to us!☺️☺️

  3. Its a new information to me.. I knew haiku is from one of the Japanese poetry formats,

    Consist of 3 lines, first line- 5 syallbles, second line- 7 syllables and last line- 5 syllables..

    1. Yes haiku my fav💚💚💚
      5-7-5😃
      But I never knew about this. So tried and I really enjoyed writing this.💚😊
      Why don’t you give it a try?

  4. Beautiful poem and poetry style. Thanks for sharing the techniques. Will try sometime.

    1. Thank you, dear💚💚💚
      I opt for short and easy ones😃
      Waiting for your take💚🥰

  5. Impactful writing💚. I’m really intrigued.

    1. Thank you so much @batool💚💚💚
      I’m glad you liked the efforts.

  6. Beautiful 💚💚
    Learnt something new today.
    Will try out soon dear👌

  7. What a lovely description of stars👌😍👌👌

    1. Thank you @parulbanerjee💚💚💚
      Give it a shot! You’ll love the style.

  8. Wow. I love this style. I have never seen it before. Thanks for introducing us to this style.

    1. Thank you so much, ma’am 💚
      Tried this yes. Loved the style. Short n crisp 😃

  9. Achha… Will try one soon! ☺️ Stars and dreams… This one’s dreamy! 🌟✨

    1. Thank you so much @sanjukta💚💚Will wait for your verse🥰

  10. Wonderful poem. Thanks for explaining the rules for this style of poetry. Would like to write one some day.🙂

    1. Thank you @310703💚
      Gowri your words mean a lot🤩

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