Rapids

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The crystal clear aqua pura

Fast flowed dashed electrified 

Smashed into the shallow

It was an animated escapade

Deafening and unyielding screams

Of guffaw and enthusiasm 

Like Apache on tidal waves

Rapids came unforeseen 

Flouting the trails

Raising oblivion in distraught

Immersed in dreamy thoughts

Collided with precipitous rocks

Leaving the luminous clouds in awe

Startled sweepingly in full blast

And life preservers to preserve

The wizardry feats of raft

Sprouted an uncharted reverie 

Of petty hurdles that messes

From immaturity to fret

With fastened beady eyes 

Young benevolent heart battered

Troubled waters splattered faces

The impulses were innate

Vacillating along tumultuous waves

Embracing a matchless cherry echo.

Ketki Jalan 

Picture – Unsplash

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18 responses to “Rapids”

    1. Thank you so much Gowri

  1. Adventure and excitement! Beautifully penned.

    1. Thank you so much Maam

  2. Adventure..n excitement.. totally feel the vibe on the wave

    1. Thank you so much Fatema

  3. Beautifully penned, Ketki. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you so much Moonmoon

  4. Beautifully writtenπŸ’š

    1. Thank you so much Pooja

    1. Thank you so much Pradnya

    1. Thank you so much Kirti

  5. I felt like I was flowing around with the rapids.
    Loved it Ketki

    1. Thank you so much Natasha

  6. The rapids are captured so beautifully!

    1. Thank you so much Sheetal di

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