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Places …

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by

Jaya Pillai
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Between the worlds we live in –

You and I, 

Are places unknown :

Little pockets of thoughts

That swirl to their own rhythm.

Perhaps, one day,

We shall sit

Under a moonlit sky

And talk about them.

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12 responses to “Places …”

  1. Moonmoon Chowdhury Avatar
    Moonmoon Chowdhury

    So richly poetic. Loved it, ma’am. 💚💚

  2. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Thank you dear 😊

  3. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
    Natasha Sequeira

    Oh Jaya, you say so much in the least amount of words. Wonderful

  4. Charulata Panigrahi Avatar
    Charulata Panigrahi

    So much in few lines.

  5. Ketki Avatar
    Ketki

    Lovely poem

  6. Mumtaz N K Avatar
    Mumtaz N K

    Lovely, I admire your precision.

  7. Pradnya Surve Avatar
    Pradnya Surve

    Loved reading this poem
    Beautiful expression in few words

  8. Pooja Mandla Avatar
    Pooja Mandla

    So much said in few words💚💚
    Wow💚💚

  9. Jaya Pillai Avatar
    Jaya Pillai

    Thanks a, lot 💚💚

  10. Sai Avatar
    Sai

    Such a beautiful prospect.. Even the anticipation is enough.

  11. Sheetal Ashpalia Avatar
    Sheetal Ashpalia

    Wow. Makes me sigh!

  12. Sonali Ray Avatar
    Sonali Ray

    Fantastic JP💚💚

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