Let it all go

When darkness clouds the core,

Hardships swell,

Despair quells ebullient word.

Breathe smooth, open the door,

Doubts dispel,

Mop tough shards of fear, undeterred.

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Don’t mourn the past, unchain,

Sift the grime,

Watch stifling flecks, skid from your palm.

Welcome the rainbow grain,

Hear its chime,

Release… embrace the healing balm.

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Picture credit : Sigmund (unsplash.com)

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34 responses to “Let it all go”

    1. Thank you, Kirti πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  1. Embrace the healing balm1 beautiful

    1. Thank you, Anuradha πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Wow! Soothing to the soul

    1. Thank you, Chandra πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. Reading this one gives me peace. Take a bow, Moonmoon dear

    1. Thank you so much, dear Natasha. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  4. Pleasing πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š
    Sit, breathe and let it go😍
    Beautiful my dear

    1. Thank you so much, dear Sonali πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  5. Such a beautiful poem. Love your choice of words as always πŸ’š

    1. Thank you, dear Gowri. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you, Sabina πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  6. Awesome choice of words. Liked it

    1. Thank you so much, Vishwanathan.

    1. Thank you, dear SrivalliπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you, Sai πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  7. A much need poem/ lesson did these troubled times. Lovely as usual πŸ’š

    1. Thank you so much for the kind words, dear Shweta πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  8. Best advice ever ..let it all go! And so poetically portrayed

    1. Thank you, Ramya πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  9. “Don’t mourn the past, unchain”
    This is something I’m learning slowly but steadily. A lovely read di❀️

    1. Thank you, dear. This poem is more like a note to self. It’s never easy. It’s a part and parcel of every moment. I strive to practice it. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  10. This was an inspiring morning read πŸ₯°

    1. Thank you for reading, Madhu. πŸ’š

  11. Beautifully written! Such a natural flow of words!

    1. Thank you for the encouragement, dear Mananeet. Means a lot. πŸ’š

  12. Love your work as usual, a beautifully rendered poem Moonmoon Chowdhury.

    1. Thanks so much for the kind words, dear Mumtaz. Means a lot to me. <3 <3 <3

  13. A healing note ….
    Beautiful dear πŸ’šπŸ’š

    1. Thank you, dear Esha <3 <3 <3

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