When darkness clouds the core,

Hardships swell,

Despair quells ebullient word.

Breathe smooth, open the door,

Doubts dispel,

Mop tough shards of fear, undeterred.

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Don’t mourn the past, unchain,

Sift the grime,

Watch stifling flecks, skid from your palm.

Welcome the rainbow grain,

Hear its chime,

Release… embrace the healing balm.

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Picture credit : Sigmund (unsplash.com)

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34 responses to “Let it all go”

  1. Embrace the healing balm1 beautiful

  2. Wow! Soothing to the soul

  3. Reading this one gives me peace. Take a bow, Moonmoon dear

    1. Thank you so much, dear Natasha. 💚💚💚

  4. Pleasing 💚💚💚
    Sit, breathe and let it go😍
    Beautiful my dear

  5. Such a beautiful poem. Love your choice of words as always 💚

  6. Awesome choice of words. Liked it

    1. Thank you so much, Vishwanathan.

  7. A much need poem/ lesson did these troubled times. Lovely as usual 💚

    1. Thank you so much for the kind words, dear Shweta 💚💚💚

  8. Best advice ever ..let it all go! And so poetically portrayed

  9. “Don’t mourn the past, unchain”
    This is something I’m learning slowly but steadily. A lovely read di❤️

    1. Thank you, dear. This poem is more like a note to self. It’s never easy. It’s a part and parcel of every moment. I strive to practice it. 💚💚💚

  10. This was an inspiring morning read 🥰

  11. Beautifully written! Such a natural flow of words!

    1. Thank you for the encouragement, dear Mananeet. Means a lot. 💚

  12. Love your work as usual, a beautifully rendered poem Moonmoon Chowdhury.

    1. Thanks so much for the kind words, dear Mumtaz. Means a lot to me. <3 <3 <3

  13. A healing note ….
    Beautiful dear 💚💚

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