Joker
Goes around
Laughter for all
His feelings stay inside,
Trapped!

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• This poem is written in elfchen format that is written in 5 lines. The first line has 1 word, second has 2, third has 3, fourth has 4 and the fifth line has 1 word. Read more about it here https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elevenie *

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23 responses to “Joker”

  1. Sad reality of a joker! Nicely put💚💚

  2. Simple n to the point.. life of a clown

  3. Few words, great story, nice elfchen

  4. Impactful!! Excellent use of the format!

  5. Poignant, Nitika. Thanks for explaining the poetry form. 💚

    1. Thanks a lot Moonmoon 💚

  6. Heartbreaking and true! Loved the form, Elfchen. Thank

    1. Thanks a lot Natasha 😊

  7. Wow…so much in so little! Beautiful Nitika!

    1. Glad you liked it Sheetal 💚

  8. Well- written Nitika💚💚

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