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I Melt

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Sarita Khullar
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#Day9

#Letter  I

I melt before you

A fragrant candle ablaze

Dispelling the gloom

Sending iridescent light

All through everlasting  nights.

#Tanka

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26 responses to “I Melt”

  1. Amrita Chowdhury Avatar
    Amrita Chowdhury

    So beautiful ma’am…

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Amrita

  2. Fatema Avatar
    Fatema

    Be the light

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Fatema

  3. Sai Avatar
    Sai

    Beautiful!

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Sai

    2. Jaya Pillai Avatar
      Jaya Pillai

      Beautiful!

      1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
        Sarita Khullar

        Thanks Jaya

  4. Nitika Sawhney Avatar
    Nitika Sawhney

    Beautiful piece Mam 💚

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Nitika

  5. Moonmoon Chowdhury Avatar
    Moonmoon Chowdhury

    This poem is a perfect example of how less can be more. You have said so much in so few words. Beautiful poem, ma’am.💚💚💚

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Moonmoon.

  6. Natasha Sequeira Avatar
    Natasha Sequeira

    Beautiful Tanka. Concise, succinct and just as it should be.😍

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Natasha

  7. Pooja Mandla Avatar
    Pooja Mandla

    Beautiful!

  8. Sarita Khullar Avatar
    Sarita Khullar

    Thanks Pooja

  9. Kirti V Avatar
    Kirti V

    Beautiful

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Kirti

  10. Charulata Panigrahi Avatar
    Charulata Panigrahi

    Liked it very much Sarita.

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Charulata

  11. Pradnya Surve Avatar
    Pradnya Surve

    Beautifully penned
    So much expressed in few words

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Pradnya

  12. Indrani Chowdhury Avatar
    Indrani Chowdhury

    Mam you are a true poet

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Indrani for such a beautiful compliment.

  13. Sheetal Ashpalia Avatar
    Sheetal Ashpalia

    Wonderful!

    1. Sarita Khullar Avatar
      Sarita Khullar

      Thanks Sheetal

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